Very good poem =D
I noticed u didnt have any ratings so I decided to be the first! This is a very good poem showing great emotion. I think that emotion is very important in order for a poem to really mean something. So good job in that =)
I just noticed two errors: handeld* should be handled* and tourhered* should be tortured*
Other than over all perfectly written
5/5

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Oh thank you so much :) im glad some one finally wrote. And thank you for pointing out my mistakes I will fix it right away, I will definatley read your work.