Paradox So Sweet

Perfect. I loved it. It was so different from all the poems on this site and it just took me from my thoughs and reality and put me into this alternate world. This piece has to be the one that flowed the best from all the ones I read from you today. Each word fit in perfectly and nothing seemed out of place or forced. The emotions were described naturally and your truly do have a way with words. Well done .. I really enjoyed reading all your pieces today and thank you for your comment on my poem .. it means a lot. *5/5*

Oh my...
Another one remarkable piece from you. Unique and refreshing from the first to the last line, very creative. I like your writing style, It's different and you have truly great vocab.
I can relate to this piece in a way which made it even more powerful for me.
You portrayed your emotions along with intense atmosphere in a really good and effective way.
I like the rhythm and flow of this piece, they're very captivating and natural.
I'll definitely check out more of your work as soon as I have time.
Keep writing!

Now I think too much
"I don't drink enough,"
And maybe I drink too much
I don't think enough

That's my favourite part of the poem, i like how its contradicting itself. The whole poem flows real well with the rhyming used.
Kelliexx