by dora
Hey darl. i realli liked this poem! i loved the title of it, and i love the words uve used. very powerful poem. |
A very beuatiful write. i like the structure of this poem and it was very nicely written. a very unique piece. :] your choice of words was amazing and you have a nice big vocabulary there. :] lol. the emotion and the image you created with your words was simply amazing. I love the poem; i especially favor the last stanza. 5/5. |
Wow... |
by RB
Unbelievable write! I loved it. Great work. I always love it when someone writes something so original like this...truly amazing. keep it up :) |
by xxrachxx
This is a really good poem keep up the good writing |
by kati
I absolutely love this...this is exactly what i am going through right now |
by kati
I absolutely love this...this is exactly what i am going through right now |
by Megan
Hey well thats a really good but kind of depressin poem |
by MyEscape
It's got a very different structure to it, but it's beautiful! I really loved it. I mean, it was full of great imagery and wording so that the reader could feel what you were going through and what you were thinking. |
by Neil Marsden
Superb! love every single line of this fabulous piece of feeling! |
by Ashley
This is amazing! how long did it take you to write this? you have real talent. i can relate... going through something like this myself! excellent job =] |
by adrienne
I love this poem!! You have amazing talent!! And honestly this poem helped me a lot cause Im going through the same thing! |
by truelyonee
Wow. this is incredible. love the use of words |