I honestly didn't understand this one?
Sorry.
I loved your words and your expresions. they drew me in.
thnx
(~:Sam Mayo:~)

This poem was nice but it seems that you forced the rhymining

"Tying someone's laces together
Than running away ecstatically
Causing windows to smash and break
Now it happens so automatically "

favortie stanza ^^

yea again not clear on the message of it, but your expressions was great, and you used powerful words that make people want to read it even if they dont know what there reading, 5/5