The Rain

by TwistedAngel xx   Jan 16, 2008


The rain came down
it touched the ground
and there was more to come

But still i stood there, waiting
hoping he would come along.

After a while,
I realized that he wouldn't come

I quickly got out of the rain
and went straight back home

As I sat inside my room
drenched from head to toe
I thought "why didn't he come?"
and "doesn't he love me so?"

What I didn't realize
that rainy cloudy day
was that my love,
my one and only,
he had passed away.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    Lovely poem. the meaning was lost for me in the beginning but it finished up with beautiful writing!! :):)

  • 16 years ago

    by Brian Yazzie

    I like this poem..with the twist at the end..makes it a tripp..keep on writting gurl..come check out my poems..plz leave a comment

  • 16 years ago

    by Black Princess

    I think you need to test the waters a little and try and extend your pieces. Your write well but your flow was off in this one. Not your best work but i wouldn't say it was your worst. You still have alot of talent and i am enjoying reading ur work so keep it up.

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