Comments : Writhing in Pain

  • 16 years ago

    by unprotected lover

    I can compare to your pain, everyone feels fear after things like that. I went through something simular and the pain just kept growing. I dont live a completely normal life, and its hard to talk about . but living up to it is your first step, dont let it control your life, i let it control the last 2 1/2 years of mine

  • 16 years ago

    by Boy

    Its sooo sad..... real feelings..

  • 16 years ago

    by Melanee

    I know how you feel also, but i could never write about it as you have done, it takes great courage.
    Excellent poem, and it will never go away, but try to remain positive n not focus on it, as hard as that is, but trust me, u will get thru it. xxxx

  • 16 years ago

    by A l y s s a

    I'm so sorry if this is from personal experience. But you've taken a huge step in writing this poem. And a brilliant job you've done too. I especially liked:

    And with this gun to my head,
    The images are once again distorted
    In a flash of white,
    Then red,
    Then black...

    Ally. x

  • 16 years ago

    by Cobra

    It I wasn't hijacked 10 years ago, I would still had my gun. But on the side I'm glad it was stolen that day otherwise I would have used it on myself if not 2 years ago, then this new year of 2008.

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by gabby

    Its tru wat u say in ur poem....and it doesnt go away no matter how hard we try to will it away
    great poem..