Dark pettle of a black rose

by brethless   Jan 16, 2008


The sun is shining
were all playing
but then u come
crash thunders roaring
a flash of lightning
howling winds heavy rain
a downpour of tears
for those who fear
scaring kids into their graves

but I'm still standing
expressions only holding aggression
I'm just as strong holding on
dredged as well
swollen knuckles

with pane thats to vane

this poem was pretty much written wen i was thirteen
i have also based a song on this now.

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  • 16 years ago

    by lorna

    Babes you know what i think of this you know i love it i think you are such a talented person who will go far with your skill for words i just wish i had a ounce of your talent you are truley brillent as a writer and a person
    love ya loads babe
    lorna
    xxx