by Alex D Jan 16, 2008
category :
Sadness, depression /
about death
The rock, my tombstone marks where I lay |
I thought this was an amazing write. The overall idea was magnificent, and i loved how you used "rock paper scissors". It was a death poem of new sorts, there was nothing cliche about it. I thought it flowed very well and it was an easy read. A well deserved 5/5 |
Just the idea almost is worth a 5/5 but the poem came through in a big way. Definately a strong write and its so poetic and perfect. I love finding gems like this nice work 5/5 for sure |
Blown away. Its one of the best works i've seen in a good long while. very original. I slowly demoralized while i was reading this. and i love when i get that.....excellent |
Never before has the imagery of such a lighthearted game made my heart so heavy |
That was really good. i loved the flow and whole idea of this poem. |