I really like this poem...really good job and the ryhming in it was good to. Keep it up.

Wow. i love this poem, its so sad but very awesome. i could feel strong emotions. great job!! 5/5

This is a very good poem mina, love the flow and the grammer is perfect, its a flawless 5/5!!! keep them coming!!!!

Wow... its so well writen and i love it... 5/5

Hiya,
I liked this alot. I guess because I can relate to it. Love is a raw emotion. Leaving us all vulnerable to its pain.

Good stuff.

Michael

Wow!!! That's sooo sweet, I loved the whole poem and the tittle's great... *thumbs up*

Oh wow...

And you've left me here all alone
To feed the emptiness of my soul
But this feeling is overwhelming me
Like my heart will never again be whole

^ i understand this......once a heartbreaks, it can never be put together fully...you lose some of the pieces.....great job on this stanza

And every line etched upon my skin
Is a path leading to a broken heart
Every tear that trials down my face
Is another reason why we broke apart

^ this is the best thing i have read all day....this is seriously amazing. (u have trials, i think u mean trails)

seriously, an amazing poem......love is like suicide........how horrible....we're all so vulnerable. you can feel that in this poem. great job, hun. keep up the amazing work

Freaking amazing. the love's like suicide at the end was a great thing.

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Aww this is very well written, incredibly expressive. i feel like im being pulled into your pain.