You asked for my interpretation on this piece. It's kind of mixed. A love poem which is unique and different. From the start of the poem I got a feeling this was about drugs in a foregin country such as thailand, malaysia
ect. Weird I know but that's the vibe I got. Though from the last line brown bags reminded me of alcohol hidden within the liquor bags. I'm guessing i'm completely off track and many people would interpret this in different ways. The poem was honestly well written and enjoyable. Structure good. Flow great. The imagery painted was gorgeous. Well done. ~Mel

Same here - I did find some brown bags a mixed line. not sure if you're drinking wild irish rose out of a small bag?? fun write though. keep it up.

I don't get this too! but it's quite interesting.. it's unique and very well written... i don't kno how to interpret this.. but as i read through the poem.. i think it is about a drug that relieves u of ur stress..well i don't kno.. hehe tell me wat it's about =D

This poem was nicely written and with a surprising ending. The rhymes matched the subject nicely, and the imagary phrases made it almost lifelike. The choosing of words was done carefuly and thus the piece emerged in the best way. The ending surprised me, the love, the first love, ruined the life of an innocent soul.

Nicely done 5/5