by XxToWriteLoveOnHerWristxX Jan 16, 2008
category :
Love, romance /
secret love
Long flawless hair |
by Scarlet Letter
CRYING.............................................. |
by Cindy Miller
Awwww! That was the best I've read in a long time. Good job!! 5/5 |
by trippetta TC
Such depth and insight, beautiful prose! |
by Anaisthitos
Wow talk about surprising twist! Beautiful, sad poem. I loved it. It started off strong and finished off powerful. The words chosen were beautiful and elegant and the whole poem was a wonderful piece. This one was my favorite of yours I've read so far. 5/5 |
I really like this one. The twist at the end was brilliant! The flow was great, the word choice couldn't have been better, and the concept was clever. Great write! 5/5 |