Through the storm

by Harutan   Jan 16, 2008


The clouds gather,
the darkness surrounds.
Rain begins to fall,
the ground chills.
The air cools,
rain to sleet-
to snow.
Lightning erupts,
thunder quakes.
The Earth, barren as the storm rages on.
The thunder lessens,
lightning grows weak.
Snow to sleet-
to rain--the air warms.
The frozen ground shows life beneath it's soil,
buds burst and life blooms.
The choking rain ceases it's unrelenting fall.
Light pierces the darkness-the sun.
The clouds dissipate and a new world shines.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    You're very smooth with your words, you know? And the things you write about are ALWAYS great.
    I think this one is one of my favourite out of your writings. I think the flow might've been better at one part, but besides that it was really well written.
    -Krystal[:

  • 16 years ago

    by xXxUNOxXx

    I love how you bring out the plot of the surrounding in hte poem, very cool, very uplifting.

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    Good word usage and imagery 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Hollywood

    I like this alotalot alot!!5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Disaster

    I likes this!! a bunch! lol!

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