I am

by Alone in the crowd   Jan 17, 2008


I am a roller coaster with many ups, downs, and twists and turns
I travel through the veins and blooding pumping adrenaline
i make the sound of children screaming from the adrenaline rush
i allow my passengers to see the past of what used to be and the rain that continuously falls
i want my passengers to ride in fear but happiness too
I am a roller coaster with many ups, downs, and twists and turns

i am Rachel
i pretend to go slow so that the thrill is fit to last
i feel the corkscrew turns deep within
i touch the hearts and lives of those that ride me
i worry about backtracking after getting so far
i cry at the thought of the one i lost
i am Rachel

I am Rachel
i land in muck when he whipped me with the leash
i showed gumption when i told you what was happening
i understand when you didn't believe me
i dream that someday you'll stop pretending that you're blind
i try to keep my anger form pushing you away once again
i hope you'll be patient and stay with me
I am Rachel

I am a roller coaster with many ups, downs, and twists and turns
My journey is rocky but it fakes to be smooth
my rider will see the truth
my rider will need patience, love, and a humor
My journey will end when the power is turned off
I am a roller coaster with many ups, downs, and twists and turns

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  • 16 years ago

    by YourThe ReasonIDiedTonight

    Definalty a 5/5 great expression and it is different from other poems i have read...keep up the great work

  • 16 years ago

    by Colby

    The repeating makes the poem different from all others.... its hard to do and pull it off. You did it but barely... try making the flow and little more...... flowlyier.... lol weird word... anyway i did like it just you could be a lot better but we all need practice....

    Keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by Beautiful Forever

    Uniquely written... Its an interesting concept as well... I really liked it but the "i" not being capitalized annoyed me a bit lol. (grammar freak) But besides that the poem was amazing and worthy of a 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by doXyouXeverXwonder

    Wow I like the expression. Keep it up!

  • 16 years ago

    by AJ Irving

    I'm back & i realy enjoyed this poem. i give you 5/5

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