You Can't Be Me

by Katie   Jan 17, 2008


As soon as I leave,
You take the lead.
Try and fill my spot,
You wont succeed.

Remember that,
As I walk away.
You can't be me,
I'm here to stay.

It wont be you,
It's me he'll choose.
As I see it,
You'll definitely lose.

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  • 16 years ago

    by PygmyPuff

    Its decent. I mean its super cute, however the second line of the first stanza is too close to the first line and the last line, so it seems as though there is an a-a-b-a R.S, then it doesnt follow through with the rest.

    Also the third line of the last stanza has an inconsistant flow.
    =C
    lol

    [PygmYPuff]

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