This poems good. nice work

Hey! nice poem, keep it up

I like the sincerity in this poem. I also like how it's different because I'm so used to reading poems about being in love, or getting your heart broken, but this is from the other point of view. Nice and original. I like your rhyming and most of the time your flow is alright. Except for in the first stanza, that last line is too long so it put me off a lot.

Good write though. :]

Much love,
Tammie xo