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by Mark Jan 17, 2008 category : Life, society / about society
Foreign countries fighting for power the more money they gain the bigger tower the tower of doom they are all trying to get and present people they will all the tower feet with their selfishness and lies their inside ghost which is filled with anger from coast to coast people walking around with anger and pain they need to stop and see and old experience regain but they won't listen they just feed the tower the tower of doom which is getting more and more power(this is not about fantasy, knights or in the past... it's present, and happens everyday in our lives...)
by Danielle
Hey, great job =) 5/5
by BlueEyedMystery
Hey! I just wanted to comment on your poem. I really liked it. It kind of had that dark feeling to it, and it reminded me of the days with knights and wars. Very good job! Keep writing! Cayce
by Estefania
Wow very nice poem