The tower of Doom

by Mark   Jan 17, 2008


Foreign countries
fighting for power
the more money they gain
the bigger tower

the tower of doom
they are all trying to get
and present people
they will all the tower feet

with their selfishness and lies
their inside ghost
which is filled with anger
from coast to coast

people walking around
with anger and pain
they need to stop and see
and old experience regain

but they won't listen
they just feed the tower
the tower of doom
which is getting more and more power

(this is not about fantasy, knights or in the past... it's present, and happens everyday in our lives...)

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  • 16 years ago

    by Danielle

    Hey, great job
    =)

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by BlueEyedMystery

    Hey! I just wanted to comment on your poem. I really liked it. It kind of had that dark feeling to it, and it reminded me of the days with knights and wars. Very good job!

    Keep writing!
    Cayce

  • 16 years ago

    by Estefania

    Wow very nice poem

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