Comments : Angel

  • 16 years ago

    by homebound

    Wow that had great emotion! awesome job! keep it up

  • 16 years ago

    by BurriedFaceDown

    I love this one because as i read it i thought of my love angel.

    And as you may now it is excellent if your reader applies what you wrote, to their own life.

    To leave your home in heaven,
    to guard a child like me.
    ^^^
    I love these lines.
    and even if you wanted they could be the first lines of the poem