The tone was nice, but the words just don't seem to impact. And I don't really mind but most hate poems in all caps. However these poems are your own and if you like that as they are the never change them.

Wow this was amazing, i liked the visual i got from this in a completly non morbid way

I liked this poem better than the one before because it shows your talent for the abstract. This poem is more focused and less general.

It really does seem you sat down and wrote this from your heart. The anguish of being put in such a horrible and difficult position I wouldn't wish upon anyone... great imagery! Keep writing from your heart and everything will write itself =)

Richard

I really like this poem. its good, u should keep on ritin! :)

♥ Megie

Great imagery! Really liked this poem I could tell it was heart felt

Fix the mispellings and it'l be great :D

It's has a very strong message and emotion bhind it! I like it!