I understand were your coming from I have so many relationship problems ,thats why i love this poem great work!!..=)

An amazing poem. the flow was nice. and this
was a very well written piece. the poem as a
whole was simply incredible. The emotion
was nicely captured. :] But the ending seems
a bit.. unfinished. .Like, I felt no closure, you
know. But above all, great write! 5/5.

I could relate with the last stanza 100%. The flow was great and I loved what you had to say. I thought the poem was a but unfinished to me and you could add so much more to it to make it more meaningful but I loved the emotion you portrayed. well done *5/5*

Nicely done
this poem was okay for me
the flow was a tad off for me
it didn't really catch my attention
but then the last few stanzas
were more intresting as I kept reading
nice poem
4/5
kaila

I really like this poem but it seems its not finished even so I love it.

Great poem it has so much emotion within the words and the honesty in it is amazing i loved it :)

This was another short but good poem your message was very well played out but being your so young I see the innocence of life in each word good job keep writing Plot121

SO sad. I totally can relate.
You did a very good job. I love the words you chose and the flow was pretty good too.

Good job!

I know how you feel, somtimes i feel like this too.
but i love it, well written.

jenna <3

I really appriciate the greatness and the powerful of the emotion of this poem.. no more can i add.. can you p.m. me when you have sad poem again i will read it.

-nightsan

It is a good poem. Emotional. Flow unbalanced. But it was true. So true. I liked the read and I felt the hurt you were coming from. thank you for the read.

This is very sad.. i can feel the hurt through the whole thing. this made me cry cause i truly know this feeling

Awwww im sorry. but i liked this poem alot! it was very simple, and was perfect that way b/c when you feel pain it isnt usually too complicated at first. 5/5!

Very sad poem so well written I want to cry

Very powerful. I know exactly how it feels to be in this situation, and I'm sure others do as well.