WHAT DO YOU SEE?

by ShawdowDancer   Jan 17, 2008


WHAT DO YOU SEE IS THE QUESTION

HARD TO ANSWER WHEN ASKED IN A SECOND

THE HUMAN EYE CAN SEE BAD OR GOOD SAD OR
HAPPY AND EVEN FUNNY THINGS

I DON'T KNOW HOW TO SAY WHAT I MEAN

MY THOUGHTS ARE RUNNING WILD SHOULD I EXPRESS
THEM OUT LOUD

SAY WHAT I SEE THATS RIGHT IN FRONT OF ME

I SEE THE WORLD AT ITS BEST PULLING TOGETHER
PIECES THAT Katrina And RITA LEFT

UNTIL SOME HEALTHY HANDS HELPED PUT THE

PUZZLED TOGETHER AND IF WE ALL WORK TOGETHER

LOUISIANA WILL RECOVER
(PLEASE TELL ME WHAT YOU THINK OF THIS POEM

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  • 16 years ago

    by adrian

    Ur not so bad yourself! I liked this one.

  • 16 years ago

    by RainbowSlider

    What you see is also the answer and how you percieve things differently from others. "Wild running thoughts" ...That would be an excellent title for a poem. I think if you wrote a poem like that it would take you from a general topic to a poem that you could expand on your viewpoints more concrete.

  • 16 years ago

    by Mello193

    I liked it, it was good. it was kind of stream of conciousness type but overall very nice

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