I liked it, it was good. it was kind of stream of conciousness type but overall very nice

What you see is also the answer and how you percieve things differently from others. "Wild running thoughts" ...That would be an excellent title for a poem. I think if you wrote a poem like that it would take you from a general topic to a poem that you could expand on your viewpoints more concrete.

Ur not so bad yourself! I liked this one.