Make it end?

by crystaljean88   Jan 17, 2008


Short hair,
With hazel eyes.
These ears of mine,
Only hears hurtful lies.

I cry at night,
With nothing else to do.
I feel nothing but empty,
See what I'm going through?

I need help,
With my hole life.
People just don't know,
How often I wanna grab that knife.

Only my daughter,
Is who keeps me here.
I love her so much,
But my life still isn't clear.

I do need help,
But I don't want it.
Because I'm starting to learn,
To just not give a shit.

Tell me what to do,
And be my friend.
Should I live my life,
Or just make it end?

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  • 16 years ago

    by Stephanie Naylor

    I thought this was very well written and i can relate, not that i have a daughter, but the fact that im not sure whats keeping me here, and i really liked this, it was strong, and it shows the courage or and strength a mom has, like yourself, 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    Yo you have your own style of writing huh? you don't use those big words instead you use simple words that can still project wat you're feeling.. nice poem =]

  • 16 years ago

    by 1Mistake

    LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =]!!

  • 16 years ago

    by Kaila

    The flow was off here and there. There were some spelling mistakes. The rhyme at some points weren't that on key. But you still made the poem about your daughter which was cool to me.
    4/5
    kaila

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