The flow was off here and there. There were some spelling mistakes. The rhyme at some points weren't that on key. But you still made the poem about your daughter which was cool to me.
4/5
kaila

LIVE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! =]!!

Yo you have your own style of writing huh? you don't use those big words instead you use simple words that can still project wat you're feeling.. nice poem =]

I thought this was very well written and i can relate, not that i have a daughter, but the fact that im not sure whats keeping me here, and i really liked this, it was strong, and it shows the courage or and strength a mom has, like yourself, 5/5