Very emotional...I can relate to this poems.

This poem was really moving to me.. It reminds me of my mom.. she just got out of an abusive relationship.. i can see the girl n ur poem.

~M@rY

The title threw me off a bit but the poem was okay.The flow was off but that's really no biggie.The word choice was good though.

<3Amber

A great write. I really liked the wayy you worded it and the vocabulary you used. :] The imagery and descriptions were great and i could feel the emotion burst out of the poem as i read it. .I really like this piece. 5/5!

I really enjoyed this piece, again you have a way with using such deep emotions throughout your pieces. It's quite beautiful.

I really enjoyed the lines on there own in between stanzas. I don't know if you did this deliberately though read on there own they speak really strongly of the message behind the poem themselves. That was interesting. They were definitly lines which stood out to me. Expecially:

Her heart belongs to him, no matter how hard the blow-

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He strangels her dreams with his anger;

I adored them two lines. They were so full and deep which hit my heart.

Wow, The last stanza. You ended this poem perfectly. The pain and emotion you portrayed has kept me shocked. Sad poems are definitly a favorite of mine and if you can pull them off then you have impressed me.

Well done this was a greatly written poem which I enjoyed from start until finish. I notice this was written for a contest. Goodluck with that. 5/5 ~Mel

Awwwwz wat a sad poem.....very well written!!!

4/5

<3 i love you silly

Wow, this poem reminds me of a friend of mine. So sad...so did your poems win any of the contests???

Very sad read, but very true for most girls!

Keep it up =n= Take care!!