Wonderland

by NyellMoonlight   Jan 17, 2008


Wonders sparkle with diamonds and rubies
fantasy's captured within lobes of magic bliss,
queen feeds with pink fractures, singing
between flashes of glassy golden lights;
Laced sights soaked with frosty inspiration
lave heart, plunging it into scarlet fairytale.

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  • 16 years ago

    by JEFF

    More Questions from this guy. :)

    What make a Great poem?
    See i always thought they had to rhyme.
    But alot of poems posted on this site don't

  • 16 years ago

    by Tracy D Rollings

    I think you did a wonderful job on the poem, it was well written and choice of words was very good, it's good to change from long to short poems, helps you think more and not stuck on the same way of writing, great job as always ,,, your friend Tracy d~~~~~~5/5~~~~~

  • It was a little short for my taste but it was good. Very well written & the word choice was perfect for it. I think it would be a lot better if you lengthen a little more but for it's shortness it was good.5/5

    <3Amber

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Even in the shortness of the poem, there was so much behind the words. i love how the lines fit together with in eachother, yet they could all hold differnt meanings when taken apart. great work on this piece of art. i loved it.

    </2 Terra

  • 16 years ago

    by Katie

    And you tell me I'm good at fitting a lot of emotion in poems. Holy wow. This one is really powerful. I love it. Great job. =]