Wow! Every line is so beautiful, wow, I really don't understand how you managed to impress me this much with poem which have just six lines, but anyway this is simply breath-taking! Every description is so intense, bravo!

A verybeautiful write. the imagery was simply
outstanding! and your choice of words really
-meshed- well into the stanza and each line
was even better than the last one read! :]
an effing M-azing write! [lol] 5/5!

And you tell me I'm good at fitting a lot of emotion in poems. Holy wow. This one is really powerful. I love it. Great job. =]

Even in the shortness of the poem, there was so much behind the words. i love how the lines fit together with in eachother, yet they could all hold differnt meanings when taken apart. great work on this piece of art. i loved it.

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It was a little short for my taste but it was good. Very well written & the word choice was perfect for it. I think it would be a lot better if you lengthen a little more but for it's shortness it was good.5/5

<3Amber

I think you did a wonderful job on the poem, it was well written and choice of words was very good, it's good to change from long to short poems, helps you think more and not stuck on the same way of writing, great job as always ,,, your friend Tracy d~~~~~~5/5~~~~~

More Questions from this guy. :)

What make a Great poem?
See i always thought they had to rhyme.
But alot of poems posted on this site don't