Comments : Captured

  • 16 years ago

    by Jackie

    A good poem, love the word usage and imagery. 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by walter purvis

    Nicely written capturing the very essence of love

  • 16 years ago

    by Pete

    The imagery is probably the best part of this piece, you use it so perfectly in this poem.
    You portray the affliction of love so elloquently throughout this piece.

    Another wonderfully penned poem.

    ~Pete.