Awww....i like that this is a happy love poem because those are so rare. It has a nice flow and rhyme to it, and is filled with beautiful emotions.
*ME*

Aww
cutee again!
this poem of yours made me aww at the end
haha
lovely work though
everything was perfect
no complaints from me
5/5
kaila

This is a very sweet poem.
thanks for your comment :)

Awe. a very sweet and beautiful write. the first stanza was very attention grabbing and i simply HAD to read the rest. :]] this was a strong and emotional poem. powerful piece, a heartfelt read. amazingly done. 5/5. :]

First, your title was cliche and the little heart thingy threw me off a bit but I kept reading...

Your first stanza was beautiful, after reading all four lines I had a smile on my face. They were so cliche yet ina beautiful way? Lol.

The second stanza was not as appealing as the first while it was still beautiful. Just not to me. If that makes sense. Also the flow was a bit off...

This is where I belong
And where I want to stay
Enveloped in your arms
Is where I want to lay

^^ My favorite stanza. I love it. The word choice is amazing and the imagry just completes it. Great job on that one.

Anywho..the fourth stanza didn't really stick out but the last two did. Oh man. I loved the fifth the most and the last lines of the entire peice summed it up greatly.

I am glad you found happieness. Overall, a beautifully written peice of poetry. Great job.

Amber.

Beautiful! I loved the love expressed in each and every word .. u could really feel the passion you feel for this person. the flow was flawless and the descritpions were easy to relate with. Well done *5/5*

Oh my lord! this is a really sweet poem.. i loved how u started and ended it.. the flow was just wow.. but wait.. aren't u just 15 and u already hav a fiance? lol.. anywayz.. this poem is heart-melting.. i'd even consider marrying u if i read something like this... =D

5

The first stanza is great i loved it...this poem is so sweet I wonderful wonderful work...=)!!!

Aw this is so cute!!!!!! i hope you really have a happily ever after

Aww, thats sooo cute!
You two will have a happily ever after...

Very good poem its my favorite soo far i love you!!!

Great piece again.
I love your usage of words and the way they rhyme. Your poems are really sweet and they speak of deep love.
This is my fav. part

"This is where I belong
And where I want to stay
Enveloped in your arms
Is where I want to lay"

That was just.....WOW!!!! i so loved it!!!!!! WOW!!!!! 5/5