THIIS IS SHYT TIGHT, AND U MAKE IT ROUGH... THIS IS GOIN 2 BE ON MY FAV POEM LIST!!! LOVE THISSS! 10/10!

Wow such a harsh poem.. if you can make this longer it can be rapped... =]

I could really feel your strong emotions here. The flow was strong and I could relate with what you're feeling. Well done *5/5*

I love this poem it has alot of angry in it and i love that...=)

I LOVED THIS, there was so much HATE and true emotion running through this, from start to finish, its pretty much simple and to the point, you'll lose like everyone else, you've all been warned, but you still do it anyway, amazing poem, loved it, well deserved 5/5