Amazing poem.I really wasn't feeling the way it was set up for the readers but other then that,this was a great write.The word choice was perfect.Emotions were extremely deep.Love it.5/5

<3Amber

This poem is amazing. i love the way you wrote it. i like yer style of writing very nicee job.

Only echo,
Is my hearts last pound.

those lines really caught my eye, they were my favorite.
job well done.
keep up the nice work!

Eh, it's okay, which is a three for me.

Your flow is decent, but try and stay away from all those cliches.