I love this poem...yes the flow was slightly rocky but the emotion you put into it made up for that.The word choice was bautiful too.

"She's stuck in these predicaments
And she's seen all her flaws
She cries herself to sleep at night
As she's throwing up her walls "

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>My favorite stanza...5/5

<3Amber

I like this from the beginning to the end. The whole poem is greatly written. I like your choice of words in each stanza. truly excellent. I don't see any problem with the flow. The emotions are very intense and whole atmosphere is truly greatly created.
My favorite stanza is:

- She's stuck in these predicaments
And she's seen all her flaws
She cries herself to sleep at night
As she's throwing up her walls-

Keep up!

Advise from me to you ... never doubt your poetry. Even if you think it is your worst work, be proud of your words and look to improve, don't be negative. :]

Okay on to the poem... I really like it! First off, the title really captured my attention and I was curious to read more. The flow could be fixed in some areas but overall I thought it was great. Great word choice, it was powerful.

Well done*5/5*

Lovely
there's no need for the note at the end
your work is always special because
it's your work
the flow was actually pretty good
not to bad
the rhyme was good
title fit nicely the last stanza
was my favorite
5/5
kaila

U should get it published:)

Beautiful work; absolutely lovely. The flow was really well, and the poem's beginning stanza has a way of drawing the reader in. Great write, keep it up!

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Another great poem! You can truly feel the emotion in your poetry..

Well this poem was just amazing. It had so much emotion in this. It had the best emotion ever and the feeling in it was just great. I'm definately going to add this in my favs. Great job! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

I dont think the flow was rocky at all... to me it was flawless.... i loved it.. i sometimes feel this way..and you did an excellent job explaining it. 5/5 from me. =]

Another sad poem! :[[ You're making me depressed! Haha, that's okay though, beause I loved this poem! ^.^

You're right the flow was a little rocky. The rhymes were also a little off, but DON'T change it, because I don't want you using rhymes that feel forced. I hate it when people do that.

And she's seen all her flaws
^^I normally don't like "and's" in poems, but I really think it works here.

Great job!

Cayce xx