Amazing write. you really captured the
emotion and easily created a picture for the
reader to imagine! :] the idea of the poem is
very nice and well thought out. flawless flow.
:] and my favortite stanzas. .

"She looks in the mirror
With razor in hand
She's finally giving up
No more to withstand"

great write 5/5.

I like the title. It intrigues me a lot. I have no idea why though. Lol. Your poem maintains a constant ryhme while the flow is still a bit shaky. Again, I am not a flow expert and rarely pay attention while writing my own. Lol.

passed>> i think you meant past. Could just be me :]

Four inch incisions
Carved down her wrist
She silently knows
That she won't be missed

I like that stanza, it was the only one that really was like boom. I don't understand why you put silenty in there. Just me more than likely. Not sure though..

In stanza 8 you said Forgive me I sin for some reason that does not sound grammatically correct. Forgive me for my sins? Or something other than that. Lol.

Other than the minor mistakes a greatly written peice. I loved it && you summed it up greatly with the last line..
Great job :]]

Amber.