This is a really good poem. I really liked the words you chose to describe it. Although, maybe you whould not skip the lones in the stanzas. It's good though. Great job!! 5/5

.:CiNdY:.

I thought it was pretty good, it didn't flow very well but the poem made a strong impact on the reader. The only mistake I noticed was that "site" is actually spelled "sit".
~gabriella.

Great write i suppose that the only reason why you skipped lines was to emphasize that it was lonely piece and i like that great work-
raindrops 5/5

Really liked to read this.
the emotions in it ..just discribing how you feel.
5/5

-blackstar