Time for me to die

by briana   Jan 18, 2008


Standing here with Gun in my hand
crying so much i can barely stand
i hate my life...
wondering which would be quicker a gun or knife
They called me useless stupid and a crackhead
now its about time to call me dead
i have few who care
some wont even dare
i cry myself every night to sleep
when I'm awake
I'm getting into trouble real deep
suicide thoughts running through my mind
hoping one day a new life to find

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  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    A short one but realy it was greaaaat
    i love it even if it seems very sad
    When GOD drops needles and pins along ur path in LIFE, dont stay away,, instead pick them up and collect them..they were designed to be STRONG!
    i wish you 're ok now ...

  • 16 years ago

    by Singmehome

    I love ur poems...itz tht feeling of depression and sadness...of loneliness...of knwing ur alone....but c this is were ur wrong..cuz i care...and it would hurt me if u leave..now u dnt want to hurt me...right???..lol..love ya!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Bernice

    Take Time and count all your blessings one by one sometimes its hard to see the good things in life because sadness overshadows us but you are a gift from Heaven look at the wonderful gift of writing Poetry
    behind every dark cloud is a silver linning
    Keep on writing girl Excellent poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Your not alone... i love da poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    That must feel horrible, i dont know you but i care about you :) great work !!

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