Comments : Time for me to die

  • 16 years ago

    by Mike Martin

    I care!!!!!!!

  • 16 years ago

    by briana

    Thankz!!!! its good to know people do

  • 16 years ago

    by Isaias Rogel

    Great poem...that feeling is horrible

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    Oh my please dont leave, there will be alot of people that will love you who you are, forget about those asswhole people, they are the ones that are useless to this life trying to make people like you cry, drown into those deep thoughts but you know we are here, everyone!!!! ok? So please dont ever think that!!! Time will never slow you down just smile well try to and let people know that you cant take me down, now i know that is hard because i am always bullied at my school, im punched,kicked,pushed down the stairs or towards their lockers but i always say "Just give up, you will never truly take this soul away from me," dragging against the wall,. So please everything will be fine!!

    Take care,
    Courtney

  • 16 years ago

    by Dreamer

    Hey briana its jr and you know i care

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    Hey this poem is very dark but great =]
    The emotion put into it is what made it really good!, Nice job

    =]

  • Wow thats really good! i know that feeling.. good job
    xoxo

  • 16 years ago

    by I Rita Valentine I

    Nooo! don't diez plz!!!! i care very much even tho me don't no u in real life!!! i've thought of suicide myself tho ><but now me think runnin away and disapperin for awhile would b better and ezier me givez ya 5/5!

  • 16 years ago

    by Punk Princess

    That must feel horrible, i dont know you but i care about you :) great work !!

  • 16 years ago

    by Amir Riveroll

    Your not alone... i love da poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by Bernice

    Take Time and count all your blessings one by one sometimes its hard to see the good things in life because sadness overshadows us but you are a gift from Heaven look at the wonderful gift of writing Poetry
    behind every dark cloud is a silver linning
    Keep on writing girl Excellent poem 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Singmehome

    I love ur poems...itz tht feeling of depression and sadness...of loneliness...of knwing ur alone....but c this is were ur wrong..cuz i care...and it would hurt me if u leave..now u dnt want to hurt me...right???..lol..love ya!!
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by nina

    A short one but realy it was greaaaat
    i love it even if it seems very sad
    When GOD drops needles and pins along ur path in LIFE, dont stay away,, instead pick them up and collect them..they were designed to be STRONG!
    i wish you 're ok now ...