"I could relieve those written moments always, again- finding chaos inside of every breath." ~I loved that line with a passion!

I am speechless. I just want to say that the poem was incredible, and that it was punctually, grammatically, spelling-ly, syllabicationally, and flawlessly perfect =]

I loved it all, and you have knack for writing.

I must read it again, because I'm not sure if I completely understand that poem, but I promise that in due time the meaning shall be crystal clear.

wonderful, once again

5/5
~Stephen White

Take my hand,
the one soaked in flames
whose palm's absorbing portal

Those lines. Amazed me. Hands down. They were so full of expression and emotion. Really beautiful. I can't express that enough..

This whole piece touched my heart and caressed my soul in a whirl wind of stunningness. Don't know if that's a word. Don't think it is lol. But your worthy of a made up word by me. Shows I don't really know how to express myself and how beautiful this is. Well done! 5/5 definitly. ~Mel

Then we can walk down the silver shores
again, dancing around the point,
towards those seas that flow from your eyes.

....WOW,great poem...the creativity and details are what really caught my eye,keep writing!it was really good

Wow. The first two lines really dragged me in. Very powerful. Awesome job. =]

I personally think this is a love poem. That's just my opinion. But anyway, I like how you express your passion and feeling through this work. I felt like I was on cloud 9 or something. lol But still, I really loved it a lot. 5/5

Wow i truly was flown into this poem with the first stanza and the last was perfect 5/5 i have a new poem if you wish to read.

Your choice of phrasing and the vocabulary used in this poem is flawless. I absolutely adore this piece. Again I must admit your style is quite unique but very effective.

This was truly wonderful. It was very, very deep. It's full of imagery and emotion, and the flow is simply flawless. You captured my attention in the beginning and held on to the end. This is another one of the few poems that I call picture perfect, because these words alone painted the perfect picture. Immaculate!

Letty

Another thought provoking piece with excellent word choice and unique style. Great job!

What a beautiful poem!
Deep and with a great imagery. Good word choice too.
I thought the end was really strong and powerful.
Very well done.
Take care

I dont know what to say ... ! Man, your poems open locked doors to different worlds...every poem is a new journey for readers to experience.

I respect and admire your talent. 5/5

I love this poem i am dark to sometimes too

Pretty good =)

"I'll repeat to silent colossuses
(who flout somewhere, invisible to the eye)
that I understand construction of red canals,
so, take my hand,
not with your palm that holds the window
to awakened stars and prudent dragons
take it with your soul,
where the fire- I suppose- begun"

this was my favorie part!!
i give it a 5/5

I once wrote a poem called 'Take My Hand' aswell. Although, you executed the emotions behind it better than I did. I enjoyed reading this.

Awesome write.

Greta xx

I loved it! Good job!