Was God so tired?

by Fran   Jan 18, 2008


My neighbour has a little kid,
For friendship's sake let's call him Syd.
An unruly and precocious child
Who seemingly heard the call of the wild.

Always in trouble but not quite naughty,
Looks like four but acts like forty,
Crash bang wallop, all that noise,
Was God so tired when she made little boys?

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  • 12 years ago

    by ArtistrySoul

    Nice poem :), i think maybe sometimes old age when teenagers start to annoy you, but you can't be sure if God is a she or he oO

    great poem

  • 14 years ago

    by Pink Butterfly

    Aw!!! Really cute.... I was totally delighted by this poem. lol... It made me smile!!! God bless you!!!

    -Pink Butterfly-

  • 15 years ago

    by Corinne

    Very cute Fran :-)

  • 15 years ago

    by Em

    Haha this is so funny. I like the stlye, 5/5. Em

  • 15 years ago

    by sneha

    Wow!It is amazing.I enjoyed it to the core.The last line says it all.U hit a 5/5.

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