Fall From Grace

by FountainsOfBlood   Jan 18, 2008


On an angel's wings she flies far away
She is the girl with nothing left to say
Always wishing for the end of the day
For the fall in a coffin she will lay

[ Okay. Basically, my English teacher told me that an Iambic Pentameter is a 10 syllable line with a strong/weak rhyme. So... if he's right, this is my attempt at a Quad Iambic Pentameter (if you can get those? LOL) So i dunno, correct me if I'm wrong ]

*Note: this is a first try... LOL*

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  • 16 years ago

    by Macaroni

    I like this. Esp the last line. :D

  • 16 years ago

    by Mommy And Me

    Well i don't know much bout IP but that was a pretty sweet poem i must say. even in length it was amazing. good work dear. :-)

    <2 Terra