The Hole In My Heart..

by Trying To Love Is The Hardest Thing   Jan 18, 2008


When you left,
You took a piece of me.
I constantly find myself
Down on bended knee.

I see you in my dreams
Every night and day,
I run to be in your loving arms
But you slowly walk away.

Why do you do this?
Why do you run?
I'm afraid to think
You're seeing someone.

I love you dearly,
And I wish you could see,
What in the world,
You're doing to me.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Sora

    I love thiis piece. totally can relate to it also. a very short and sweet write. and you got your message across perfectly. the flow was nice too, and i can feel the emotions you expressed. job well done! 5/5.

    -Ashlei.

  • 16 years ago

    by Nobodys Hero

    This peom has a nice flow and the rhyming is very good
    =]
    Great job 5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Just That Girl

    I can totally relate to that poem.. i really loved it although it would've been better if you went on with a few more stanza's.. Although its wonderful
    take care x

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