I can totally relate to that poem.. i really loved it although it would've been better if you went on with a few more stanza's.. Although its wonderful
take care x

This peom has a nice flow and the rhyming is very good
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Great job 5/5

I love thiis piece. totally can relate to it also. a very short and sweet write. and you got your message across perfectly. the flow was nice too, and i can feel the emotions you expressed. job well done! 5/5.

-Ashlei.