Dont Let Go To Soon

by Alexander   Jan 19, 2008


I let go of you my angel,
to soon now i see.
How i wish i could go back,
but sadly i can not.

Look at me my angel,
do you see how i cry?
Can you see from there,
that without you i want to die?

Hold me my angel,
for i feel weak.
Please angel please
dont leave me.

Talk to me my angel
and tell me how you feel.
Please say something angel,
for i feel the darkness coming.

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Embrace me my demon
i have sinned,
for i have let go of my angel.

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  • 16 years ago

    by Mr Rhee

    Ooohhh. I like that one. Such feeling. I can feel what you want in your heart. Welcome to the club, even at your age.

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    It's short and it has a nice message into it... it's not one of your best but i can say it's good.. =D

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow another great poem!!!
    keep up the great work!
    4/5

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by Brittany

    It's beautiful.
    There's this mystic trance it puts you in.
    And the title is perfect, intriguing and beautiful.
    Well done =)
    5/5.