I like this a lot. It is intense and truly greatly written. You created powerful atmosphere within every line. The portrayed emotions are overwhelming. You managed to say so much within such short piece and that is truly impressing.
Favorite lines:

-Tingles speed up her spine, her fear
possesses, stresses, messes with her mind.-
^^
Very effective and somehow haunting...

Greatly done!
5/5 from me

Its very cute. I enjoy the aliteration in the 1st & 3rd lines. The structure is lovely, and you did it very well since it isnt your style. Its good if it WAS your style. Its good in general.

Wow, amazing poem. I absolutely loved the alliteration. You should have gotten above an A+ haha. Seriously though this was a beautifully written poem. You have a lot of talent!

-Tingles speed up her spine, her fear
possesses, stresses, messes with her mind.-
^^As said above this is also my favorite line. :]]

Keep writing!
Cayce