Comments : Dark Knight

  • 16 years ago

    by NyellMoonlight

    This is truly beautiful from the beginning to the end. It has serene rhythm and flawless flow in each stanza. You created wonderful and interesting imagery and the emotions are expressed greatly.
    My favorite stanza is:

    - You stayed there in the dark
    caressing the fears away
    watching for the shadows
    keeping them at bay-
    ^^
    Very captivating...

    Keep up!

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Your choice of words in this poem is outstanding, very unqiue and whole piece is priceless! Honestly I enjoyed in every line, very deep and greatly written, I love it, you should be proud on your ability to write something incredible as this.