Lady of Dark (Etheree)

by Angie   Jan 19, 2008


I've decided to repost some of my older poems. This one was written in February of 2006.

Lady of Dark

moon
goddess
beautiful
lady of dark
shine your crescent beams
upon this aching soul
as I pray for peace within
guide my way on this new journey
where I seek a place my heart may heal
for my eyes of blue shall see crystal clear

**Etheree ~ consists of 10 lines and a syllable count of 1, 2, 3, 4, 5, 6, 7, 8, 9, 10.**

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  • 9 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow, this is so powerful, and you are so good at writing formed poetry.

    #I love your title choice, perfect fit for the poem and also eye-catching.

    The poem is really touching and comes from a place where there is a deep sadness and pain inside, and there is a small voice in your head longing and begging for something to bring some peace to that feeling, and this is the voice that cokes out in your poetry.

    Beautiful imagery, and the form is well put together.

  • 16 years ago

    by desiring love

    Nice

  • 16 years ago

    by Melpomene

    I think I've told you before that I love Etherees & that I love yours. This poem was beautiful. Honestly. I adored the entire thing. A breath taking poems which portrayed so much gorgeous imagery throughout each simple and effective line. So vivid and capturing. This is definitly an amazing poem. I'm really happy you decided to re-post this or I wouldn't of got to read a fantastic poem. Loooove it. ~Mel

  • 16 years ago

    by Kim

    I absolutely adore it! It's so gorgeous and beautiful, hauntingly so. You have such a way with words and formed poetry! I love this poem, I agree I'm glad you decide to repost this! :)

  • 16 years ago

    by Nix

    Wow! This is absolutely amazingly written, Willow you left me speechless with beauty of this masterpiece. So vivid and creative description... Wow, I am also happy that you repost your older pieces cause this one is truly fantastic! Well done!