Well written with hope

Wow...
Breathtaking piece... I'm truly speechless. I can't express how much I like this poem.
The imagery that you created is so magical, fantastic and endlessly vivid, soaked in peaceful tones. Truly beautiful piece, deeply touching and emotional.
I like your choice of words and outstanding descriptions.
Truly wonderfully done!

Wow! This is absolutely amazingly written, Willow you left me speechless with beauty of this masterpiece. So vivid and creative description... Wow, I am also happy that you repost your older pieces cause this one is truly fantastic! Well done!

I absolutely adore it! It's so gorgeous and beautiful, hauntingly so. You have such a way with words and formed poetry! I love this poem, I agree I'm glad you decide to repost this! :)

I think I've told you before that I love Etherees & that I love yours. This poem was beautiful. Honestly. I adored the entire thing. A breath taking poems which portrayed so much gorgeous imagery throughout each simple and effective line. So vivid and capturing. This is definitly an amazing poem. I'm really happy you decided to re-post this or I wouldn't of got to read a fantastic poem. Loooove it. ~Mel

Nice

Wow, this is so powerful, and you are so good at writing formed poetry.

#I love your title choice, perfect fit for the poem and also eye-catching.

The poem is really touching and comes from a place where there is a deep sadness and pain inside, and there is a small voice in your head longing and begging for something to bring some peace to that feeling, and this is the voice that cokes out in your poetry.

Beautiful imagery, and the form is well put together.