Comments : It crashes down around me...

  • 16 years ago

    by MyMuse

    I love this poem sissy, I dont know what this world has come to but you know things happen! But still coolio poems sissy :] 100/100 =D
    SissyxRose

  • 16 years ago

    by she

    Good poem,sad, but soo true,unfortunatly

  • 16 years ago

    by Raine

    Wow that was very very impressive hun... it makes you actually sit and look at it in different prospectives and i bet alot of people can relate to it as well i know i can... you have a true talent keep it up =] oh yea and im gonna keep a eye out for that book your writing hehe ttyl
    [R.A.¡.N.E]

  • 16 years ago

    by melissa

    This is beautiful !
    absoultely amazing =)

  • 16 years ago

    by XxSINISTERxX

    This poems awsome!!!!!! and but so true :(

  • 16 years ago

    by silent turbulence

    Amazing!! ur really nice!!

  • 16 years ago

    by undying blusher

    "The stench of death is in the air,
    while the quiet rains of tears fall in pairs..."
    Beautiful line.

    The sleepless zombies one was not bad either. ;]