Comments : Crushing, Hurting, And Finally...Dieing

  • 16 years ago

    by Christina

    Wow great poem!!!
    it was very well written!
    keep up the great work!!!

    <3 i love you silly

  • 16 years ago

    by jLegendc

    I like this one although there were spelling mistakes but it's probably just a mistype.. sad poems really gets to me =( nice poem!

  • 16 years ago

    by EssenceOfLace

    This was amazing! although on this line
    "what happening to me?"
    you need to add an"s" to "what"

    other than that, great. i can actually visualize running to the grim reaper :P

    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Fanny

    Wow. the poem really connected to me cause when i was young i was almost dying and i was thinking the same things .anyways loved the poem im adding this to my faves