This poem hit a nerve in my heart. Many have suffered from cancer, the most ruthless of diseases. I myself have lost many loved ones due to it. The message and emotion that was put through in this piece of work makes me believe that there are still a few poets out there that know how to write a good poem. The only thing that would make this poem any better is if you worked on doing some punctuation, other than that i see nothing wrong with this poem at all. 5/5

Signed,
Alexander