Hollow

by TwistedAngel xx   Jan 20, 2008


So hollow, this feeling inside
This feeling that I have to practically hide
Everyone's expecting smiles on my face
but my heart's nothing but a vast empty space

So hollow, this feeling in me
This feeling that I just want to set free
Everyone's expecting me to speak out
but all I want to do is scream and shout

So hollow, this feeling of mine,
This feeling that I can't underline
Everyone's expecting me to forget
but that is something I don't want to regret

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  • 16 years ago

    by T uh Belle lll

    Your repetition was awesome. I can relate to what your poem is trying to say. I'm going through a difficult time at the moment too. But I know we can work it out and come through in the end despite all the negative energy amidst us.
    -tia

  • 16 years ago

    by Krystal

    I almost cried. I love this poem. Not particularly fond of the emotion expressed in it, though.

  • 16 years ago

    by Ryley B

    Yeah i love this one its just like im feeling right now

  • 16 years ago

    by Bekka Smekka

    I love this poem!!! great choice of words!! 5/5 :):)

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