Dear you write so well love this one too
its v.good

Omg this is so sad
but writen in great form it really flows all i can say is wow

I love this =] great work.

This is so sad and descriptive. i can almost hear the people crying for their loss!! well done!! :):)

Welp... only one word describes this poem. AMAZING! truly amazine yep ur in my favorite authors.

Wow, grea poem, nice flow and well written

you are amazing when it comes to sad poem which is good but in a way not good...

i hope you have beautiful life and if not then fight to have one...

U know what when i read this i suddenly became sad i dont know why, uhmnn anyways i like this poem. keep it up!!have a nice day..

Amazing poem!!

really well done! :)

sad tho :) but still really really good!

I really like this poem but toward the end it seemed to slow down and the flow wasn't as good as it was in the beginning, but it could just be me. very nice poem.